Writing Friday #15: “Innisfree” Imitation (for issue Two of The Crusader)
Bliss
I will leave.
I will go,
And find myself in bliss.
I will build a mansion,
With a pool.
Four diving boards I will have there,
And a basketball hoop.
And live alone in the thrilling wonderland.
I shall have some excitement there,
for stimulation zooms through the roof.
From the beginnings of dawn,
To the glowing lightning bugs in the night.
There will be no moths or annoying bugs to disturb me,
I hear the pool water splash all around me,
And my eyes burn.
For I am doing the most classic dive of all,
The holy cannonball.
Then my deceiving ears hear, “And you may title this piece,
Writing Friday #15…”
For my deceiving eyes have tricked me once again.
1 comment:
I like the way this piece moves in and out of time frames. It moves from a general point of view to a specific point in time. I like the choice of words and the flow of ideas. Fun!!!
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